Avoiding the LONG Short Cuts

Writing for Children Blog | craft
February 25, 2016

By Jan Fields

When I was in elementary school, we lived about four blocks from the school.
It was a straight shot from the schoolyard to my house. No turns. No
problem. Starting in second grade, I was supposed to walk home every day
with my little brother.

Unfortunately, my brother liked "shortcuts." Since there is nothing shorter
than a straight line, his shortcuts involved wandering around the
neighborhoods between the school and our house. And since I was supposed to
be "looking out for him" it meant me following him through neighborhoods,
trying to talk him into coming on home. In the end, I always got in trouble
since I was supposed to be the older, wiser one.

Right, try getting a little brother to do anything just because you're the
older, wiser one.

I understand the lure of my brother's shortcuts. They were untraveled
roads. They might have hidden joys that weren't part of the normal dull
trudge home. We could be "ground breakers." Unfortunately, as exciting as his
shortcuts might be, they always ended up taking a lot longer and sometimes
we got lost and didn't make our destination at all (under our own steam.)
And they could have even been dangerous.

Sometimes I still feel some of the same frustration that I felt in the face
of my brother's "shortcuts" only today, I feel it for those looking for a
good writing shortcut. A little ground breaking, new, exciting way to reach
the goal of publication. Something different. Something that looks less
long, hard, and trudge-like.

What's wrong with a nice shortcut, someone offering to publish "new voices"
that the other publishers don't want to hear? Well, first, it's based on a
lie. The lie is that recognized publishers don't publish new voices. They
do. They want new voices. Even more, they need them. One of the things I do
these days is review books, so I get lots and lots of books to read from all
the major publishers, and MANY of those books represent the author's first
published book. Publishers want new voices. But they must be new READY
voices and they must be something the publisher believes they can sell.
Getting ready to be one of those voices takes time and trudging. There just
aren't many born with writing skill, it takes practice, training, and nasty
hard work.

Many times those publishers or agents who make a lot of BIG NOISE about
being the only ones to give "new voices" a try are planning to suck a little
money out of your wallet...and little else. Vanity presses and even no-cost
POD companies know their most likely source of money is the author
him/herself. If they don't simply charge a fee, they often make back their
investment directly from the books the author buys from the publisher. To
avoid any chance of taking a loss, the "publisher" often does little editing
(and often the "editors" aren't really qualified to do more) and even less
marketing. So authors end up with boxes of books that they hand-sell
eye-to-eye to each person. Imagine if J.K.Rowling had to physically speak to
each reader -- how many copies of Harry Potter could have sold that way?

And the agents shouting about their passion to focus on "new voices" can be
even worse. At least the vanity press gives you a product you can hold in
your hand. Many of those agents just take your money, telling you that all
writers have to pay their agents when they start out. Then they submit
scattershot to the same tiny publishers the author could have approached on
his/her own.

But isn't it true that you have to have an agent? And isn't it true that
agents need to be paid too? Not all multi-published children's writers even
bother with agents. And second, authors do not pay agents. Agents receive a
cut of the deal they make. Think of them as "Realtors" for your book. You
don't pay them, but they do get a cut of the end deal.

So the agents get paid when their writers get paid; they get a cut of the
money they make for us. That gives them an incentive to make us as much
money as possible. If, instead, the writer simply hands an agent a check at
the beginning of the relationship, the agent doesn't have much incentive to
do anything. And many of the "pay me first" agents don't do anything...many
have never sold a single book. Others have only gotten the exact same deal
the writer could have gotten on his/her own. A reputable agent does so much

We live in a technological wonder world that is making it very hard for us
to face the reality of publishing. Writing for publication is hard work. A
lot of parts of the process are no fun at all. And even the no fun parts
take way too long. Everything in our lives is being streamlined and made
faster; why not publishing? I don't know. I just know what my destination is
and I choose to follow the road that will get me there. I choose not to
wander off to see if another path might be easier or cheerier, not unless I
thoroughly research the path for good and bad and decide it meets my goals.

Really, we don't all have the same goals and that's fine. If your
destination is different, there is nothing wrong with that. Maybe you just
want to see the story that you made up for your kids in publication for your
family and friends, in which case, carefully researching for the least
expensive vanity press so you can get a finished product into the kids'
hands in a nice package is a good idea. Why go through the years of
commercial book publishing when your whole audience is in your grasp? And
why learn how to do all the things a publisher does well, when there are
vanity presses who can do it for you? There's nothing wrong with that. But
if you take the "family and friends book" path, you won't reach the
"thousands of kid readers" destination. They don't go to the same place;
they CAN'T go to the same place.

So, what road takes you to the destination of having many readers whom you
don't have to go drum up yourself? First, write the book, and take your
time. Write it well. Then write it better. Then write it better still. Then
write it better again. Work on it, stew over it, sweat some, keep polishing
and pruning and reshaping until there isn't a single sentence that hasn't
seen your scrutiny over and over again. Do it until you know every possible
way to say each thing, and you know you've said it the best possible way.
Honestly, I've read slush pile manuscripts, and the majority of ones that
are actually coherent were just sent too soon...they could have been good,
but they weren't. Don't let impatience kill your book.

Honestly, write that in big letters on a sheet of paper and post it near

Second, meet the market. Know what's out there. Know what books by *first
time* authors are in your bookstore. Read them and re-read them until you
feel sure in your heart that you know why an editor bought that particular
book. Then apply those lessons to your book. Don't try to write THEIR book,
just try to revise your own to the point where you can answer the question
"Why will an editor buy your book?" Don't ever say the words, "My story is
better than a bunch of the crap out there." Instead, ask yourself why your
book is worthy of a spot alongside the best of the books out there. Do that,
and you have a better chance of making your book THAT GOOD.

Third, get a market guide and pour over it. Then research all the publishers
that sound like they would be right for you. Then find books by that
publisher and read them. If you cannot find any books by that publisher at
the library or bookstore, ask yourself: do I want a book that won't be in
libraries or bookstores? If not, keep looking until you find the match
that's right for you. Look specifically for publishers that bought books for
the same "why" that you came up with when you asked yourself honestly: why
would someone buy MY book?

Fourth, learn the address of your final destination. Get their guidelines.
Find out how they want you to submit. Submitting wrong can be the same as
not submitting. Why send it if they won't read it? Yes, it takes
time...everything about this business takes time. Really, it does. But let's
assume you invested the time in making it the best book possible; why would
you then not bother making sure it found the best home possible?

Fifth, send it off and start your next book. Don't stew about things in the
mail. If you can't get your groove on for another book, write a magazine
piece something you can force yourself to sit down for. Or try poetry, I
know several writers who write poetry to clear their minds between books.
The key is to occupy yourself with something besides fretting.

Sixth, when you hear back, learn but don't break. Learning makes us do
things better. Breaking makes us quit and try something easier. All the
published authors whose books you studied at the second step, they were
learners. The book you held in your hands when you studied the markets, that
may have been the author's first PUBLISHED book, but the odds are really
good that it wasn't the author's first WRITTEN book. They kept at it and
write a book that an editor loved and a publisher believed in. You can do
that too.

Yeah, the right road home from school wasn't much fun when I was a kid. And
sometimes it really seemed I had trudged it way too much. But at the end, I
was always home. And honestly, that's what mattered most to me.

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