November 3, 2015
When editors ask for characters that grow and change, they aren’t asking for a story about life’s lessons. They don’t mean they want a lecture on manners disguised as a story. What they want is for the situation in the story to impact the main character in some way that causes growth and change in the character. And they want it to happen during a story that engages and entertains.
When you are totally engaged, you can’t help but learn from the experience. I remember one day when I took my young daughter outside to play while I read a book. She marched around with a talking stick, made a birthday cake out of packed sand, and “rode” a train created from a row of flat rocks that border our garden area. Pure entertainment, right? After we went in the house for lunch, she informed me of the following things: “Running down a hill with a talking stick can make you fall.” “If you pour water on cat poop, it turns into black beetles.” And “You put water in birthday cake to make it stick together.” Clearly, a totally entertaining experience was also about learning. [Of course, guided learning would have skipped the cat poop lesson, but a lesson it was.]
My daughter didn’t separate entertainment and learning – so why should we, as writers? Of course, it’s important to remember this about the anecdote I just shared: the child learned through the entertainment, during action and totally on her own (keys to keep in mind for our stories).
So how do we engage the youngest reader so that they both enjoy and learn from what we write? We take a young reader into a new exciting experience and let the reader draw conclusions – just as taking my daughter outside let her draw conclusions about the world around her. Now, keep in mind that if the experience is too new, too foreign, a young reader will not have a base of comparison to build conclusions upon. So young children’s stories set in exotic places also stress the things that are the same – family relationships and friendship, for example.
So, check your manuscripts today. Do we leave our reader enough freedom to examine, experience, engage and learn? Or do we try to use fiction to force-feed a lesson? If any line of your story has “summed up” the lesson you intended to teach, you’re probably force feeding. But if the experience makes the reader think a bit and come to a conclusion – then you probably have a story that editors are waiting to hear. And that young readers are waiting to love. Good luck with that.
6. Good News
Rosi Hollinbeck: This week I received the 2013 Pewter Plate award from Highlights High Five magazine for Action Rhyme of the Year. My action rhyme "Feel the Beat" was published in the July 2013 issue of Highlights High Five.
Katherine B. Hauth: My nonfiction picture book, What's for Dinner? Quirky, Squirmy Poems from the Animal World (Charlesbridge, 2011) has been selected for New Mexico's 2014-2015 Land of Enchantment reading list.
MIKKI SADIL: My second tween novel, CHEERS, CHOCOLATE, AND OTHER DISASTERS, will be released Friday, April 11th, by MuseItUp Publishers. It is for girls aged 10 to 13, and is a story about psychological bullying. When the new girl comes to town,nothing in AJ's life is safe from diaster, not even cheerleading and chocolate. It will be available in ebook form from Amazon, Barnes and Noble, MuseItUp Bookstore, Smashwords, Bookstrand, and other ebook distributors.
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